Showing posts with label Star Wars Fanfiction. Arielle Sag. Excerpt. IMDB. Arielle Screenplay Productions. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Star Wars Fanfiction. Arielle Sag. Excerpt. IMDB. Arielle Screenplay Productions. Show all posts

Saturday, June 7, 2008

A bit about me

Hey folks. I don't own any of these characters, but I'm creating my own Star Wars movie in fiction, and I don't mean to step on any toes. I just like the character Kyp, Luke, Mara, Calista, and I created Kim, Katie, and Danielle when I was 19. This is the future based off the original story line, with a few characters from books that are probably out of print. In this blog, I included the last part of chapter 4, :).

“You mean literally?” Luke asked worried. She shook her head.

“Edwin kills them all. Kyp almost died cause of me…” Luke again touched her with the force. This time she blocked him.

“I didn’t know Kyp was capable of love.” She raised an eyebrow.

“There is a lot about the dark side no one knows about. I need to get to where he is, and if you want to be included in this, I need your word you won’t fight.” Again she wondered what was reaching out to her, it was a blanket of darkness.

“Danielle, its me Kyp. I had to tell Luke what I found out, he deserved to know. I want to meet you on Tattoonie, cause I don’t think this clunker can make it to Naboo or anywhere. “

Okay, don’t get caught in the pully. I’ll meet you there.

Friday, June 6, 2008

Chapter 4. Father Figure? Any? Star Wars Fanfiction

I DO NOT OWN THESE CHARACTERS. I just borrow them, add my own, and create a world where you loose yourself in, and I hope you like what your reading. Thanks Arielle Sag.

Chapter 4

Danielle noticed her communication device go red, as in indicating she had another person coming in. She decided to feel who it was, and cursed under her breath. It was Luke, how he got this number, she didn’t know.

“Kyp, I think their grandfather needs to take Kim and Katie somewhere safe like Coruscont, and you hook up with me.” There was a pause. “ I need to take this message, it looks like Luke got my number after all.”

“He is worried that’s all. Trust him, but you’re not going to Naboo alone. I won’t let you.” Danielle smiled.

“Thanks Kyp. Pick a place and let me know where you’re going.” Danielle hit it off, and switched over. His imaged came up, and her wounds were healed.

--

Kyp turned to Katie and Kim and their grandfather.

“Looks like you get to come for the ride. Do any of you know how to use the Force?” He went to the cock pit, and pulled them out of space. He had to think about what he learned, what was happening, and if she just lied to him, then she found out something and she was getting into trouble. He turned the ship around, and punched the coordinates for the place he was just at. He knew where she was going, and he would not let her go back alone.

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Aaron was laughing his head off, but he was also worried. Kyp was not a man to mess with. He was dark, and he was dark. A war was brewing, and Edwin didn’t appreciate Danielle training other people to use the dark side as an instrument of good. He was on Naboo, the whole planet was being changed into a big trap. He had no idea if it would work. It was a slave camp here filled with children, and they were working on building their fighters, and their weapons. It was sick, he agreed. But, it was just recently they did it here. No one would know, and Aaron had to get her on the planet. After all, Aaron made that ship, he knew how to stop it. Poor sister, she’ll show up.

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“You look like hell…I need to ask you something Danielle…something personal.” Danielle looked at the screen with her face still healing up. He seemed concerned and shocked, but he must be upset about something Kyp told him.

“Look, I don’t talk about it. It’s not your fault, and I don’t remember anything but bits and pieces. All I know is there is a growing darkness around me, and it’s my heart. I’m not sure what it means either. I have to go to Naboo. That letter wasn’t lying.” Luke must of reached out with the force to feel her state of mind, and this time she did not stop him. He touched her brain, and seemed to feel her body.

“You’re injured. How can you walk around injured like that? But if you are my daughter why didn’t you come to me sooner.” Danielle blinked not tears, but frustration that he could find those memories, those emotions, and those very reasons why she stays away from Luke. She was not like him. She was dark.

“When I heal, it works opposite then with light Jedi. It injures me. I can’t come to you Luke. I can’t call you father either cause I was a scientific experiment to help an old Lord fight for the galaxy once again. I got away when I was eleven, and those injuries never healed. I have to take care of my own problems. I don’t trust myself in the real world, I get angry quickly, and I can kill. I know how to kill, and I know how to make life.” Luke must of turned up the volume.

“Who did this to you?” She was surprised at the anger in his voice.

“His name is Edwin Skywalker. He’s related to Vader’s mother’s brother. That’s all I know. He isn’t strong, just sick and smart. He wants to bring back the Emperor. But he can’t do it without me. I also have a twin. His name is Aaron. He’s just like me, but has no care for life. But he can’t bring back life.” Luke seemed distracted.

“Where are you going?”

“To meet up with Kyp. I know where Edwin is, but he has another dark jedi lord name Scott. He raised me till five with everything dark…”

“Please, it’s not necessary to tell me the whole thing. I saw it in your memories.” He was calm now.

“How many dark Jedi are there?” Danielle tried to think.

“I know he’s building a dark academy on Naboo, and he is more concerned with being prepared to battle me, or try to kill everyone that I find happiness with. Every one I touch dies.”

Chapter 3. Hold On Tight.

Chapter 3

Luke was in his X-Wing fueling up. He was impatience, and he was waiting for permission to launch. Mara Jade was in bed, being checked over the best doctors to see what she did. If she did make it worse, there would be hell to pay.

“You sure you don’t want to take the Falcon or the Jade Saber?” His transmitter went off.

“I’m positive Leia, I gather you’re going to find the information?”

“Yes, the doctor doesn’t know what happened to her, the illness is gone. Luke, I’m scared. If she can heal that, what else can she do? She is wanted, and that was supposed to be a trap for her, and she is gone. If we can’t stop her…”

“Look Leia, I wasn’t prepared for what she did. She was concentrating on it the whole time and hiding it at the same time, usually I feel the attack coming.”

“That’s what Mara said. What if there really is a trade deal? I never told him to write a letter by hand. And I talked to him, and he said the letter was bogus. He wouldn’t even know how to trust a girl with his daughter’s life.” Luke didn’t know about that.

“The Senate is up in arms about this Bounty Hunter being able to get through the shields without them going down.” Luke’s eyes widened, but he heard R2D2 twitter.

“Hold on a sec Leia, R2D2 is saying something. I don’t believe you R2, there is no such thing as a ship made to go through a sun.” Leia was still on the other end.

“Luke, do you think that is why she ran? Because of the ship?”

“I don’t know why she ran, but I’m going to find out. She will know now there is nothing going on Naboo. I know. Too bad Yoda isn’t here, he’d know what to do. Or how about Obi Wan…”

--

Kim was all excited, they were going to Naboo. She couldn’t really wait much longer, but she had to. She missed Danielle, and wished she could be on her mission with her. They really were bounty hunters too, but they really did rescue missions together. Her communication went off in the back. She went to her communication. Katie was sleeping along with her grandfather. She was selected to watch the flight.

“Katie? Kim? This is Danielle.” They didn’t have a screen, for their ship was really old. But there was a communication device.

“Danielle! Hey! What’s up?”

“I need you to pick up a friend of mine. His name is Kyp Durin. He should be close to where you are located. He’s in that part of the galaxy. I found out my job is a trade deal, and I need help. I almost got captured by the Republic, and they are all after me.” Kim didn’t want to flip out, but she almost had a heart attack.

“Don’t call this line again.” The communication was turned off, and Kim looked to see who did it. It was her grandfather.

“Hey! She needs our help, we can’t let her die.” She opened the communication again, and she saw Katie come out. Kim was pissed.

--

Kip Durin was running for his life. He was being trailed by storm troopers. He told Danielle that something wasn’t right, and that he felt like someone was on his tail. He needed a ship, his was broken, and fell straight out of the sky. He was lucky to make it in one piece. His light saber was in pieces, and all he had was the force, for which, he was using left and right. He had to try that technique Danielle uses to hide her identity. He focused his attention on his energy, and pulled all the energy inside, he heard the footsteps stop. He had a feeling that this was beyond them, and they needed Luke Skywalker now. This was no funny business that was going on, and he didn’t like being hunted down.

“Kyp!” Kyp looked up. There was a ship in the air with that kid she hangs around, what’s her name, Kim. But he didn’t care, he used the force to jump, and soon he was inside. The gangplank going up slowly and the ship slowly rising in the air, Kim was right next to him.

“We almost couldn’t find you, but I used the force to find you. Are you okay?” She must of saw the cut on his face, the scar on his side, and the blood dripping. This was not a good day.

“All I know is she can’t go to Naboo alone.” Kim laughed.

“She knows that.”

“Kim!!!!!” It was their grandfather. Kyp was fast, he was on his feet and in the cockpit. He knew how to fly better than this grandfather.

In the sky, there were ships at least 3 star destroyers, and they were sending out not t-fighters but some new kind of fighter, looked like an x-wing, but it was black.

“Woa I feel dark energy. Let’s get into hyperspace and quick.” Kyp was avoiding them, and the shots were missing the ship. He was flying this ship as fast as it would go. Such a clunker, but at least it got him away from his trap. He hit the button to where he didn’t know, but soon the ship jumped into hyperspace, and no one got injured.

“It’s great to have a knight on board that knows what they are doing. They were flying all over the place.” This must be that grandfather Danielle talked about.

“We did no different then what he was doing Grandpa.” Kyp hoped this thing had a communication device.

“Can I use your communication device?” He smiled.

“I have Danielle on the line!” It must be Katie, Kyp thought. These kids are too young for this. He was lucky to find Danielle alive the last time he ran into her. A Dark Jedi by the name of Aaaron had been torturing her, and she was barely alive. She was left for dead. Kyp knew nothing about healing, but took her to a friend who healed her. Originally, he went searching for her for her ransom money. But it didn’t turn out. She is a real sweetheart, but man does her temper rival Luke’s. She just keeps it in better control. She is lighter then she’s ever been, but if she get’s anywhere near those guys again, they could turn her back.

“I’ll be right there.” He went back and wanted to cry. How old is this ship anyway? It reminded him of the Falcon.

“Danielle, we can’t do this alone. I was hunted down, my ship was shot out of the sky, and who ever was hunting me almost caught me. I don’t think it’s safe out there for Jedi, and if I tell Luke, he might want to know what’s going on.” Kyp was being honest. There was a pause on the other end. The whole team was in the room.

“I don’t know Kyp, they almost put me in Jail.” Kyp flipped out.

“Jail? How did that happen? You didn’t mention that in the communication.” There was a pause. He knew if she went into Jail, she would disappear with that ransom on her head.

“I’ll tell you later. Why don’t you call Luke, if you think that is important. All I know is I don’t know what in the heck is going on with this kid, if it was a set up, if there is really a trap, or what. But I have to go there.”

“There is three way communications on this ship.” The grandfather interrupted.

“I’ll listen but not say anything.” Kyp sighed.

“Come now, you are on the most dangerous ship in the world, and the only person that can stop you is Luke Skywalker, and I don’t know what went down, but if you keep this up, they will get you. You and I both know if they are after me, its cause I saved your life once. Your friends were on that same list. If Luke tries to save your life, and goes to Naboo after you, then he will also be in the line of fire.” She just breathed on the other end.

“Are you okay? Don’t tell me you’re doing premonitions again, they won’t get you again. I promise.” She didn’t say anything for a second.

“I’m waiting for you to call Luke.” He wondered what happened. She must of thought of something. He punched the number for Luke’s X-Wing first. There was a buzz sound, but finally someone picked up.

“Luke here.”

“Luke its me Kyp.” There was a pause as if he must of surprised the hell out of him.

“Kyp… how do I know this is Kyp.”

“Trust me its Kyp.” His audience said in the background at the same time, besides Danielle.

“Where are you?” Kyp actually felt relieved talking to Luke. He was the best man to involve in this plot, he had no paranoia, and he trusted his instincts better than any other Jedi.

“I’m in the outer rim somewhere, I was going to hook up with Danielle S…, shit.” He heard Danielle curse on the other side.

“Is Danielle with you too? How can I trust you Kyp, she is a Bounty Hunter, and I think just saved and gave my wife the chance at ever having kids.” Kyp knew Mara, and he knew of her disorder, it can’t be cured.

“Danielle how in the hell did you cure it?” This time Kyp had to ask Danielle. There was a loud snort on the phone.

“Don’t get distracted Kyp, I was doing her a favor. I know how to heal, remember?” Kyp had to think, then he remembered finding her, and watching her wounds heal up. Of course, she couldn’t do it by herself.

“Danielle…this is Luke. You know there is no trap in Naboo.” Kyp flipped out.

“You’re telling me Luke you planned on putting her in jail?”

“Look Kyp, you’re not helping things. So knock it off. And what did you mean by S…you were saying Sk….” Shit, he thought to himself.

Suddenly the line was quiet on Danielle’s side, and he was about to say he found out who she was, when there was a loud bang, thud, and a dead line.

“Danielle..Shit…?” This didn’t come from Luke, it was Kyp. He couldn’t help it. He felt compelled to keep her safe.

“Let me contact her, Kyp.” Kyp wasn’t sure about that.

“She could of shut it off herself you know. She has a nasty temper.” He thought, reminding me of you. Too bad I can’t say anything.

--

Danielle banged her head against the opposite side of the ship. The shipped was pulled out of hyperspace. She flipped out, and ran to the cockpit. She put up her shields, and before she knew what was happening, a beam hit her, and the shipped rocked. The shipped was caught. She decided to get the beam off of her, and tried her best by moving the ship left and right. She was going backwards. Her intercom went off.

“Well hello sis. Nice to see you again.” Shit. The voice sounded familiar. She couldn’t place it.

“Nice to know you remember me. Who the hell are you?” She reached out with the force to try to unblock all the blocks in her brain. After all, she had amesia. That slip by Kyp helped her somewhat. Kyp after all was the one that found her, clothed, and left for dead on Tatoonie in the sun, barely hydrated enough to even recognize the difference between a guy and a girl. She owed Kyp her life.

“Nice to know you think you have me.” She turned on the secret weapon, and suddenly she was free from the beam. She flew the ship forward, and she felt a wave of darkness come over her, it ripped through her clothes, through her body, and soon all the healing that had been done which had been recently was coming undone. She didn’t know where this man was, or how he managed to pull her out of space but she cried out loud….

“Danielle?” The voice from the back stated. Her communication went off at it was Kyp.

“I can’t talk right now, I’m busy.” She closed her eyes, and let her droid fly the ship back into space. She had some power over this man, but not a lot. She saw a planet, and she heard Q twirp, he had the location in his system, and they were back in hyperspace.

She got up from her chair, and she saw the blood. There wasn’t many people who could do that, and now she would have to meditate on this, but first she had to talk to Kyp.

“Kyp, did you find out my last name?” She went into the back, thanking goodness there was no images. He would see the scars reopened, and her shutting them back up.

“That’s not important, what in the hell happened?”

“We must be in the same region, cause I feel your presence is close. I think we need to go to Naboo. I think I got a warning.”

Chapter 4

Danielle noticed her communication device go red, as in indicating she had another person coming in. She decided to feel who it was, and cursed under her breath. It was Luke, how he got this number, she didn’t know.

“Kyp, I think their grandfather needs to take Kim and Katie somewhere safe like Coruscont, and you hook up with me.” There was a pause. “ I need to take this message, it looks like Luke got my number after all.”

“He is worried that’s all. Trust him, but you’re not going to Naboo alone. I won’t let you.” Danielle smiled.

“Thanks Kyp. Pick a place and let me know where you’re going.” Danielle hit it off, and switched over. His imaged came up, and her wounds were healed.

--

Kyp turned to Katie and Kim and their grandfather.

“Looks like you get to come for the ride. Do any of you know how to use the Force?” He went to the cock pit, and pulled them out of space. He had to think about what he learned, what was happening, and if she just lied to him, then she found out something and she was getting into trouble. He turned the ship around, and punched the coordinates for the place he was just at. He knew where she was going, and he would not let her go back alone.

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