Friday, June 6, 2008

Star Wars Fanfiction. Whole New Plot Line From Novels

Hey. I am posting chapter two in this blog, its only 2 pages, and if you want to read the whole thing, you will have to go to my fanfiction site on this site, in the links. its http://www.fanfiction.net/~warriorasag82

It's called, a New Dark Jedi Arisis. Can't go into the plot line, but from this I hope you will like my fanfiction work. :)

Danielle stood in front of Mara and Luke knowing that she had to hide her identity, and she had to do her best not to get in trouble. She had a life on the line, a trade deal, and baggage to make sure didn’t die. Luke should know better than to bring someone sick along.

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Luke was standing on the flight deck on Coruscant, and Mara was next to him. He was looking at Danielle, but was that her real name? He saw her business card, it just said Danielle the Bounty Hunter. But what was her real name? He knew she was lying through her teeth about her name, and he was scared that she could hide her strength. He didn’t even know that trick. He didn’t know a lot of what she did. What and how can it be possible to hide one’s strength? How powerful was she, and her hair was so dark black that it made him wonder if it was her real color.

“Will you stop looking at me like that?” Luke felt Mara’s intentions, and before he could stop her, she had her light saber out, and trained it on her neck. Danielle looked at the light saber on her neck, then Luke decided maybe she should be put into jail. She could be dark, and he was thinking with his emotions, not about the Order. If she did run into Kyp, and she did kill him or he works for her, she could be the same as the Emperor, and who knows, maybe it’s a trap for himself. He took out his light saber to trained it on her neck.

“Aren’t you trusting.” She said sarcastically, but he didn’t realize the reaction was light, cause there wasn’t anger in that, but only sadness.

“You are sick Mara…I could heal you if you want?” Danielle stated to her. Mara’s anger sparked.

“I’m not sick. Bugged off. Drop that light saber.” Danielle didn’t seem scared, and she didn’t seem upset. She dropped her light saber, and she waved a hand. The plank went up, and he heard a lock. The ship went invisible, and Luke knew whatever she was planning on doing, her ship would not go in custody of the Republic. The engines roared, and up it went into the sky, with Danielle bellow with two light sabers at her neck.

“Did you get her Mara?” This time it was Leia walking up with guardsmen. Danielle looked around her, and he saw her eyes darting. She was obviously thinking of a way out. Luke didn’t know her strength, but he decided to take a chance and grabbed her arm. Danielle quickly ripped away, and in a matter of seconds despite the fact the raw power that ran through his system that went straight to his brain, he went black.

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Danielle didn’t want to hurt them, but she didn’t want to go to jail either. Her friends were going Naboo, and a deal was in the works. It was a trap, that damn letter of acceptance, and they were running into it, so she would have no way out. She disliked Walic. She saw Mara Jade’s body twitching, and she felt her pain as she was out. She knew Luke would wake up fast, but she had to do something for Mara. She felt her pain, and she wanted her to be able to have children.

She walked over to Mara and knelt down. She put a hand over her heart, and closed her eyes. Her hand turned a blue color, then pick, and the red of blood that was abnormal changed to normal, and the twitching stopped, and she heard a groan from behind. She didn’t take long. She stood up, and she waited till the shield went down, R2D2 she forced out, and jumped into the gangplank. She thought this would be a hard mission with three Jedi, but now she had to do it alone. She had to rescue 3 people, and she knew that she would need ammunition. If that meant calling in Kyp Durin, she will do that. She needed someone, and perhaps he would come to her aid.

“Ugh” She was already in the sky, and the plank was shutting. She looked down, and Luke was by Mara side. She could tell by his expression that he thought she killed her, but she knew that reason was she was still and not twitching. She had a lot of raw power that she controlled on a regular basis, but she couldn’t be caught today. She had a trade deal to work out on, and she was starting to realize including the Republic was not a good idea. He did look in the air, her invisible cloak was on. He reached out with the force, but she used her energy to stop him. He was holding Mara in his arms, and crying. She was out of it, she didn’t realize how hard she hit them, but all she knew was she had to hit them in order to get away. Leia was now awake, and she was pointing at the sky. But by then, she was gone. ….

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Leia ran over to Mara as Luke was holding her close. Mara snapped awake. Luke and Leia did the same thing and looked in the sky.

“Luke, what did she do?” Luke put Mara down.

“I don’t know but I’m going to take my X-Wing and follow her. Mara needs to find out all the information she can find on her, she is way too strong and practiced to be a Jedi Knight, which is probably why she wears black. If she is going for a trade, I’m not going to let her do it. There’s no way.”

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